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filled

immense emotion
will not fill the empty space
compassion needed

A contest entry

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  • sgking123 silver member
    November 16
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    wow

    profound and so well said.......emotions are so uncontroleld whereas te compassion is controleld ina very positive manner and is drected...nobody could have said that better..short sweet and so good.


  • Babies Blues
    November 9
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    Haiku to you...
    I like to respond to haiku's with one in return, not sure why, I guess it is contagious.

    small twister, spinning
    revolutions faltering
    blown away, dismissed


  • grampabob1946 silver member
    October 9

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    A lovely write!

    Everyone needs compassion. We feed three stray cats, because we have compassion for all living things. I am not sure there are still three though as they only come out at night. It makes us feel good.


  • awannabepoet
    October 6

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    Nice little senryu here Violet, how true it is that there immense emotion is never really enough when compassion is outright absent and missing.

  • sgking123 silver member
    October 6
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    wow

    this is remarkable....imemnese emotions are not equal to compasion and compassion surpasses the...I am aphilosopher myself and I would love to discuss on this very intersting contarst with you....can u send me first impressions

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