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a tax of priority

so sad we wage war
hand deep in pockets but we
clench our fist to heal

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 10

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    great thought provoking images, such as stick with the reader. nicely done.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    October 5

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    Great wisdom found in these three lines, a sad social comentary on a nation that still thinks it is great. Good content found in your economy of words. Write on!

    Dennis 8bird*