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I Love...

My love for you is the greatest this worlds ever seen,

beyond what is shown on TV screens,

i love everything about you,

even when you lie because i could never doubt you,

i love the way you look after sex,

laying there glistening wet,

i love the way you make me feel,

like your very own man of steel,

when I'm with you time stands still,

you're like my addiction,

and our love is the endless supply pills,

you i will forever cherish,

and without you i surely perish.

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  • GothicFyre
    October 7
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    Great stuff, really liked it.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 6

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    the addiction of love is the splendor in the game of life when you are the giver and make all things so very nice love the message you have penned hugs always Angel♥