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The Halloween Stalker

walking home from my friends house
a noise behind me made me pause
laughing, I saw a mouse scurry
my fear made my brain blurry

being Autumn I started getting chilly
so I picked up my pace and hurried
wind blowed, sounded like a whisper
not usually the type to worry that it was sinister

took a step and so did it, ran and it did too
my heart started thumping, my head reeling
my side hurt, it was really very chilling
the whispers that I could not run from

I felt a slight touch upon my skin
I screamed so loud my heart began again
I jumped in terror and turned around
it was nothing but a silly clown

a trick or treater playing games with me
at least I was hoping that was all it was to be
but just as my mind started to settle
he threw a sharp knife, shape as a nettle

my scream was so shallow with blood pouring down
he stood there laughing looking like a clown
the sweat turning cold within my soul
I wake up an find its Halloween morn

 

I pulled the cover up tight on me, looked to the window

he was standing there looking in, made my blood run cold

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7. Just plain creepy backwoods farm scarecrow haunted junk

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  • catstar
    October 10

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    This sent shivers down my spine. Wonderful write. I won't be talking to any clowns this halloween, . Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck.


  • Ez Writer silver member
    October 5

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    Samantha ,
    A sCaRy goood write a spooky delight .
    Tonight I'm sleepin close to my cellphone !
    But I really think that I won't sleep a wink .
    Cuz your poem , just chilled me to the bone !
    Thank you for sharing !! Grrreat read !!
    Best wishes , Friend Easy



  • Daxteriana
    October 5

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    Whoa. I wonder what happened in the end. Did you leave it open-ended on purpose?

    This was great. I love it! It adds a slight thrill of anticipation at the end.

    Great write indeed. Good luck in the contest!!!

    •*~♥Dax♥~*•


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 5

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    SCARRY INDEED!!!!!

    This would be a nightmare for sure!!! Lately I have been having strange dreams also! I usually don't even remember my dreams but these I do!


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 4

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    i loved the scary aloneness in this ive experieced similar and had 3 shadows which scared the begeebers outa me so did this and he was still there in the morning CRICKEY hange of under wear required lol very excellent work .. dad i am


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 4

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    Sammy love this is so good honey scared the pants out of mr for sure I loved this .. you did so well honey Hugs always love♥

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