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Who I am

People say I’m changing
    trying to hide who I am

Materialistic
Superficial

Slipping into dresses
    instead of mini skirts
Wearing brand name polo’s
    to replace band tees

But I’m still me

My IPod is full of heavy metal
      cranked up
I still play paintball
        every Sunday

Now my neck is draped
      with pearls and gold
My hair is done up
      in curls and pins

I’m the prep with a wild side

I know how to act
I know what to say
My eyes betray me
    burning like blue fire

I’m good at wearing this suit
      but that’s all it is

I’ll stay true to who I am
    head held high

I won’t back down
        from being who I am

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