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Passionate Storm

Bright and full of electricity.
In a flash she shines,
  Lights up his world.

Bold and alive.
In a crack of caring sound,
  He calls out her name.

Joining together at the sound of a million teardrops on the pavement,
They create a storm of passion.

Always together.
Attached at the heart,
Sharing emotions in a tragedy.

Doing her best,
Young Lightning tries to glow.
But she is nothing without her Thunder.

Searching she finds him trapped in clouds of pain,
They have no plan to release him.

Her gentle love unable to pass through his prison bars.
She tries to cry out,
But he is her voice.

The wind picks up,
And he drifts away.
Alone and lost in the endless sky of her mind.

Lightning
Without her Thunder,
Fades away.

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