In days that I believed I was alone
You were there with me
And I thought I'd lost my way another time
You were there with me
You saw me through the other side
To stand against the hard road
In days that I believed I was unworthy
You were there with me
And I thought I was broken more than before
You were there with me
You saw me to the other side
To rise above the fear
You will not abandon me
This much I know
For after all I've been through
You still walk with me
You're still here with me
Still watching, guiding, waiting
You help me carry on
For all that we possess...
These days I believe I am not alone
You are always here with me
And I know that my path has been chosen now
You are always here with me
I will see you at the other side
My love, my life, my all
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Written on 5th October 2009 at 01:48 GMT
For Dan
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A contest entry
- JUST BECAUSE by Whispering Wind.
1000 points, ended October 5, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - That- One Special Person! by who iam.
1500 points, ended October 28, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is very good! I really enjoyed reading it
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Your entry has been entered in a contest that has been judged prior to mine.One of the requests I had was to "please not enter an entry that has been judged before"
Your poem is Beautiful and fits within what I was looking for.
So sorry that it does not comply because of this request.
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You accepted prewrites. The contest this was in before was over before I entered this into yours.
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Now this is a love poem. I have so many but I dont think any come to what this is. I hope you do great in the contest. This really made me feel good to read. The flow of the words, the way you seem to put your soul into it. As always great work SH
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just awesome! please pass the tissues for the tears are dripping down on my cheeks...just beautiful to say the least...niaish so much for sharing and for entering
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