Standing alone in the street,
Waiting for the next thing to waste my life on,
Wondering who i will break this time,
Who's pain will haunt my very rage.
Just Walking through the empty streets,
Bleeding heart in my chest,
My life just a mess,
Because of you.
Running through the woods,
To find something to prey on,
Just trying to find a reason to live,
Wanting to find something to hang on,
But theirs nothing that wants me,
And it's all because of you, You, You.
Author notes
Just a poem. Came to me. Yep.
A contest entry
- depressing or love poems. by SiC.
500 points, ended October 16, 2009, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - give me you by moonkissedtiger.
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This is great... i love it.. it is running deep with feeling.. and you are wanting to numb it.. it has everything to express me.. and what i do to you.. imma srry.. but ur writing speaks the truth
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Lots of emotion & I love that. Great write.
Fave lines: "Waiting for the next thing to waste my life on,
Wondering who i will break this time,
Who's pain will haunt my very rage."
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great write, like the emtions. good luck in contest.
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Kshhhh I Love It! And Understanding
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