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Halloween

Ghouls, goblins, witches and frights
These are the creatures of Halloween night.
A wandering wisp is lost in the abyss
The vampires bathe in a bloody bliss.
The Headless Horseman rides threw the woods
And scares Lil' Red like a good monster should.
If you find that monsters and spirits just won't do
Then Halloween is a holiday that isn't for you.

Author notes

I love Halloween. It is probably my most favorite holidays.

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  • spiritual wolf
    October 28

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    i love the last two lines they are great. this write was well penned but unfortuantely it doesnt fit what im looking for. apparently i didnt make this very clear in the contest. sorry.


  • Melee Vau gold member
    October 26

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    well written, enjoyed the fun to read, I could see this in a kids book of halloween poems. my fav lines:
    "A wandering wisp is lost in the abyss
    The vampires bathe in a bloody bliss."
    (boring bit - fifth line threw =t hrough)


  • Bluebellella
    October 7
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    quite good

    good imagery and rhyme


  • Daxteriana
    October 4

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    I love the little rhyme scheme going on here. It's short and sweet.

    I like it, even though it didn't scare me that much.

    Oh well, good luck in the contest!!!

    •*~♥Dax♥~*•


    • codsta
      October 4

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      Haha I tried so hard to make it scary! I don't know why, but I just can't write scary poetry. Short stories on the other hand... well thats a different story.

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