I want what you have
Give it to me now
I'll take it myself if you don't
Give me your smile
What are those?
There's two and their pretty
I want them
Look my way
What's that you're doing?
I want you to do that to me
Do it now
Please, take my hand
That's really pretty
They're really soft
Come closer
Kiss me
Somewhere my dream is out there
I want to find her
I want this feeling to go away
I don't want to be empty anymore
Author notes
Lonely and bored, same old same old.
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Um, not to embarrass you or sound stupid, but: Aww. You'll find someone again. Don't worry. Especially when you write things like this. I'm impressed, dude. You write really good stuff when I stop by to read it. Much improvement from the beginning back in...what? Eighth grade or so? (GOD it's been a long time since then...Scares me, really.)
First stanza caught my attention big time. "Give me your smile"...one of my favorite lines, actually. ND the second stanza was good...and the third (though, honestly, it didn't interest me AS much)...so on so forth.
Hope you all are doing well, sorry I'm not there to party for our senior year...
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This tugs at the heart! It is hard when you are in this position, but never give up hope! She is out there somewhere...... Keep looking!
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