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bad seeds

take hold elizabeth
shaking taking breath
and slowly drifting off into your dreams
with a head upon your shoulder
hold you till it's over
stryct ninety seconds is much longer than it seems

lay down with me
drinking bitterly
lay down with me
and hold me till i die

shuddering breath
drinking to your death
a night cap for dear jane
topping it all off with bitter seeds



Author notes

this is the rethinking for jane toppin, but it still needs more verses and alternate chorus lyrics

where did Jane Toppan go to prison?

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