Crystal light's
brought down in streams
waking up the mornings dreams.
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Love the picture
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intense
short intense and wow graphic -
Beautiful and deep.
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Goood mornin Tanya !! A lovely write !
You have created an enchanting poetic
vision - of pure delight ! Short yet succinct;
mellifluous each line ... Thank you for
sharing !! Take care ,
Best wishes & hugs , Friend Easy
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There is a nice hushed tone to this piece, prayerful and gentle. Beautiful!
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From sweet dreams to a sweet awakening to a new day, this what we wish for anyway.You painted a beautiful picture in my mind that brings a smile and a good way to start the day--with hope. welcoming a new day. Thank you for sharing.
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