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Only Death Can Set Me Free

 

 

 

 

It is my belief  that death penalty be exercised

For the coldest of cold offenders

Justice is not justice for all

When a man is set free once he surrenders

For anyone to hurt a child,

The coldest of hideous deeds

Excuse it away for thier past,

Never minding the children's needs

There are those who say it's too easy

Let them suffer and live

They not being the victom or their parents

Whose choice it should be what punishment to give

It's not about revenge

As people often say

It's about giving back

Part of what was taken away

Victoms and families can't live freely

When sharing the same air

As the evil monster defiling them

Without any morals or care

So if death or life in prison

Be what you're asking me...

I say death without hesitation

Let my family be set free

 

 

 

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  • Tercarro
    October 5

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    Good Point

    Can we condone such behaviour as murder. No and because of that we must punish those who commit it. 25 years in jail and then freedom is not punishment, it is merely a different place to live for free.


    • GuiltedShadow gold member
      October 5
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      I agree, but not just for muder. For people who commit sexual abuse especially with children.


  • TerriMac gold member
    October 5
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    Some very valid points -
    Good write
    Good luck


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 4

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    Powerful, and I completely agree. Actually, Robert and I were just talking about a guy who had ...
    Well, it was horrible and it involved his daughter. Robert turned him in, even though he had told him that in confidence. There are some things you just don't keep a secret, and that is one of them.

    Incredibly written, though.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~