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I love you but I'm getting tired of you're games. You go around like you know every thing and treat me like crap in the process. Four years now, we have been together and I haven't regretted any of it because- Because I'm in love with you. But It's over, I am not going to handle you pushing me and my family around like that any more, its just not worth the pain. I'm not giving up because I'm weak, I'm giving up because I'm strong enough to let go.

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  • Great job! I loved it! Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!!

  • No problem! ^w^ Okay your prompt is: "Giving up doesn't mean your weak, it just means your strong enough to let go"