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Listen To The Lights

Think about it.
Twenty eight years old and no ambition.
Too scared to dream
Eyes covered by caving fingers,
delicate frailty.
How could you be so passive?
Just close your eyes but once,
see the horror of memory.
Frankly, it's pathetic.

How long has this been going on?
Friends abandon,
love is a carry-on left at the terminal.
Lost but not found
so how do you lose what you never had?
Listen to the lights, passing cars.

Watch them both collide with ease.

Born with wounds
time cuts through every-time.
Simple migraines echo though out.
Can't you see time is losing you?
But you're losing yourself.

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let me know of any errors you see. i suck at editing.

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  • This was a very well written piece you have here. I enjoyed reading this. I liked the second stanza. It was good. I enjoyed reading this all. Keep up the awsome work.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 4

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    sigh. oh my.
    I really wish I had some useful words to say but alas am brain dead; this write just breathes off the page and into my mind securing me in it's place and making me feel ... a whirlpool of sorrow and emotions - one of your finest pieces