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my fucking friend

My friend i feel like she doesnt care about anything except herself. when i talk to her it makes me feel depressed like i want to commit suicide. she thinks she knows everything but she doesnt i sear the only one who understands me is well.. my mind.

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this is a peom that goes for everyone who has those days with a friend.

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  • uldiah
    October 4, 2009
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    Wow

    Wow raw and angry! Time to find a new friend......


  • StarEyes
    October 4, 2009

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    Yeah! I know that feeling! I have one of them friends too! But the one I am talking about, well she is indirectly trying to come between me and the love of my life that is noooooooooo friend! Grrrrrrrr!

    Great job on this one!