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Sing Me A Song

Sing me a song, but not one of grace.
Perhaps a song to leave this place.
For sadness and sorrow fill my every space,
So sing me a song of a better place

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Meh...just kind of popped into my head.

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  • Iofiel
    October 12

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    Ooh, I love this. It's short but it says a lot in just four lines. And I liked the rhyme, I'm a sucker for a good rhyme scheme. Nice write. =)


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 9

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    Short and to the point. I liked it. It was very well written and enjoyable to read. It flowed nicely and got a message across. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!