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Invisible...


How can I be so torn apart
That I'd gladly rip out my own heart
That I long to feel nothing
That I find no comfort
That sleep brings no peace
That there's no respite, no surcease
That my tears fall endlessly
Like a bitter rain
How can I feel so much pain
And no one ever sees it??

Author notes

Been having some issues with depression lately

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  • anaisnais
    November 2

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    Boy, I've come to reading this after a Sunday of gloom brought about by others and this so fits! Thankfully I can shut away these things until those concerned see they are way out of order but it does not stop the hurt and damage done... I hope your own sad situation has lifted some since you wrote this piece that seems able to touch so many....well done on conveying such emotion in this piece.


  • Firequeen
    October 5

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    oh sis
    this tugged at my heart
    I am sorry you are having a rough time
    I am here for you though
    your not alone
    Loves ya
    Fire


    • PandorasBox
      October 8

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      Thanks sis- I know you are & I'm so blessed to have you...its weird, that I'm feeling such a mess when things in my life are finally getting [UNDERSCORE]better[/UNDERSCORE] ... maybe a delayed reaction to all the crap from this past year finally hitting me? Makes me feel a bit on the looney side!
      Luv u 2
      Selena


      • Firequeen
        October 9
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        Its possible sometimes it takes a whilke for it to catch up
        I'll be thining of you and if u need me im here
        Loves ya