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Reflection

I look at my reflection
what do I see?
A tiny emo girl
looking back at me.

She has tear drops on her face
from when her dad got mad
she has cut marks on her wrists
from when she got sad.

She has blonde hair
and big blue eyes
nobody listens to her
nobody hears her cries.


She has on heavy clothes
to hide what she's feeling
and she wears dark makeup
that isn't always concealing.

She has a face
that used to be so happy and pure
but it's gloomy now
because of everthing she's had to endure.

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  • this is about me


  • StarEyes
    October 4
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    This is hauntingly beautiful. What a great read this one is! I love it! I have been in that girls spot, and it's not fun.