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My Demons

little demons
in my ears
remind me of
my biggest fears.

They tell me
that there's a way out
and it's painless
I won't have to shout.

But then again
what about my friends?
Will my death
lead them to their
bitter ends?

I need a way out
cutting doesn't work
I think I'm going insane
I think I'm going beserk.

My little demons,
my weaknesses in life,
they control
my grip on the knife.

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creepiness.

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  • lesbian-in-love
    October 4

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    This was good and very interesting to read. I am sure that people who have been there no how hard it is. I liked these lines:

    My little demons,
    my weaknesses in life,
    they control
    my grip on the knife.

    Keep up the good work!