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Peace in the Night

He had always admired the moon's fleeting
light and her passing shadows.
He always watched the jewelled sky
twinkling whilst the world slept.
He found peace in the stars.
Now he is at peace amongst
the stars. In heaven he rests.

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Umm. My first poem for a long, long time.

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