I lost the battle
the war i needed to win
I lost my everything
Because i was so thin
As I watch over, seeing her broken
I regret all the things
I left unspoken.
Her eyes hold the words
The ones so true
The reasons i love her
the depth of pure blue.
Now i remember everything
and what it all means
Her brown waves of comfort
Her smile, her wings.
I leave her things to remember me by
i leave you my love,
my heart and my soul
Because without you
I'd never of known them at all
She wills me to fight
fight for my life
The heartache it causes
knowing i've already died.
Her tears as they fall,
run down her chin.
This was the battle
The war she couldn't win.
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this was great, it really made me think about how screwed up m life is....
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wow! i can sort of relate i understand how you feel cause i know my parents feel like this about me all the time or something similar....it must have been so hard for you and im sorry to hear it
but god this made me cry i just thought what if my family writes this about me one day????
"Her tears as they fall,
run down her chin.
This was the battle
The war she couldn't win." those are my favourite lines but i loved it overall..
it touched my heart it was so sad...
ill shurrup now lol but keep up the good work!!!
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wow, this brought floods of tears, I can relate to this so much having watched an old friend fade away, losing the battle against annorexia, this is a great piece,
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