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Unconvinced but I'll try.

I'm cryin "Uncle!" but no one hears me.
I'm looking at you, yearning for the intimacy that completes me.
I know the meaning of starting over again.
You say "baby be mine".
I say "let's be friends".
I'm only starting to begin again.
But you've successfull tricked me into thinking there could be more.
I am moving away now, please stop me at the door.
Say, "I am not the other man that has been with you for years.
That has forced you to leave a trail of tears."
At this moment, I'm half empty, half full.
If you're sincerely interested, I still possess the tools to love and be great.
Let's not waste time, this isn't my first date.

How does this poem makes you feel? Pity? Frustration? Determination?

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  • darlee77 gold member
    October 10

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    I recieved mixed feelings with this one. Sadness, regret, longing and uncertainity.
    Very emotional. Good one. God bless.