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Can't Quit Queen

I hate it when I forget that I am Queen.  
When my bejeweled crown that sits above my eyes feels like a burden on my head.
When my vision becomes cloudy from the smoke around me.
Smoke from so many dreams & hopes & promises.
I ignore the singing of my royal robe and try to steady my walk in the wrong direction.
and two steps from hell's dor I close my eyes againist the sting andI smell my burning flesh.
My crown began to melt into my skull, kicking the power switch on.
"Queen. Come back!"

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  • Predaw
    October 4
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    Not bad. Clean it up. "the sting andl smell..."