I have an apt, but it is not my home, the road is my home, no one knows who i am,
or where I am from, girls try to come along for the ride, but like my shirt says,
if you can read this, the bitch fell off, I live life, with no regrets,
i ain't ready to settle down yet, I am afraid of nothing embarrassed by none,
i have no shame i live to love, I have no name, nor no face, and the road is my place,
you think you know me, guess what you're wrong, i am a titan,
i can't be stoped i am a rouge a rebel without a cause, there's nothing you can do to stop me,
you think my life is wrong i'm here to tell you what's life without a bong?
i drink i get high that's just life baby, deal
if don't like how i live, just walk away, as far as i'm concerned you have no say,
so get the fuck out, you don't belong with my life, if you can't keep up, then just don't ride
everything means nothing as far as I'm concerned life is for pleasure so live it up,
deal with shit as it happens don't fucking complain, "History is just one fucking thing after another"
i can't help but agree, it's how i live my life, now fucking get off of me,
what you think of me doesn't mean shit the only thing that does is me, that's it
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The Quote is from "History Boys"
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its is so you. i'm on the ride for life because i ain't the bitch that fell off
so don't you dare to try and throw me off. i don't care if you like to do those things its who you are and NO ONE CAN CHANGE THAT!!!!!
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....(Summer Jo's comment is a bit insulting toward your love poems)
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Yes!
Now this is something I can understand. This is who I assumed you were from the beginning! All those sappy love poems were tripping me up but this....this is you. Nice ranting, very nice.
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Sounds like a page out of my book.
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It's an interesting take on the topic - and certainly, I'll admit I've played anonymous for this sort of effect; when you're no one, nothing slows you down.
This is an aggressive rant, and hell yeah man, I've been there. I also kind of enjoy the beauty behind flickering between one skin and the next; you're an actor, so you'd get that. Gotta say, I appreciated that Jimmy Dean input - that's who I wanted to be as a young teenager.
This is rough, this is proud and wounded, but it's true to the mark and it's very close to the way I run, even though this one's about you - 'don't explain, don't complain'.
As for the structure, the flow of it certainly worked, and certainly caught my attention. Loose, rough rhyme, a fast pace, and a not-stoppin'-for-no-one attitude, and you combine that with the defensive almost snarl of the tone, and it really works.
It might just be a rant, but it was right on the money, mate.
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-blink blink- interesting my Lord, very well written and rather thought provoking if i do say so myself.
i love the way you seem to be letting out all your umm... whats the word im looking for... -thinks on this for a while then gives up her head starting to hurt- i dont remember what i was gonna say there so never mind
but again this was really good.
XxoxX
Rose
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