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Six Daggers

You told me, Oh yes you did
You'd never fall for anyone else
You'd never feel this way again
when you're not with me

but now things have changed
You broke everything you've said
You left me shattered
You left me beaten and battered

You were just Six Daggers To Heart
When left me
You were just Six Daggers To My Chest
When I figured out you were just a lie
It was just Six Daggers To My Heart

Now I've lost what I had
I'm lonely and sad
I don't know where to go
Don't know where I'll go

You were just Six Daggers To Heart
When left me
You were just Six Daggers To My Chest
When I figured out you were just a lie
It was just Six Daggers To My Heart

The pain, I withstood
The lies, I endured

The girl, I loved
The girl, I lost

You were just Six Daggers To Heart
When left me
You were just Six Daggers To My Chest
When I figured out you were just a lie
It was just Six Daggers To My Heart

You were just Six Daggers To Heart
You were just Six Daggers To Chest
You were just a lie, You just left me
It was just Six Daggers To My Heart

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  • StarEyes
    October 4

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    Yeah, how well I know this one! But that was then and this is now, and I will gladly take "now" over then anyday! It don't hurt, (other than the damn miles) But that is being on as we speak...hehe.

    Great job on this one!