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just because i start to grow

just because i start to grow
please dont leave me on my own
i still like to play with leaves
and hide and seek between the trees
and splash in puddles in the rain
how i wishto be small again
i hate thatt you can't here me think
i know mum that your on the brink
of forgetting all my childhood ways
or how im changing day by day
i love to be in the younger six
at the park
playing games with sticks
so please dont leave me on my own
because i dont want to stay at home

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  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    October 4

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    awww ali baby..my lll posey pants... just thought you wanted some space to get your work done...I promise next weekend...you me n a leaf pile...bet i win tho lol
    dd i tell you lately how incredibly proud I am of you? love you always and forever...mummy xx