The truth in my heart ...
My mother gave birth to me,
but you, my love,
have given me life.
A contest entry
- Wedding Band Affirmations. by Poetryintheblood.
900 points, ended October 5, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Deep Love Poems by Fire-Fly.
500 points, ended November 21, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me if this needs revising
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A nice poem, open, honest and straight from the heart.
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well stated!!!
nicely done.
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Short sweet and profound
If a man ever said words like this to me I would instananeouly melt into a pool of liquid at his feet, and fall irrevocably in love with him in that one instant.
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josie
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aww so short, but so sweet. in just a couple of words, you expressed so much. i love it daddy, lol
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Short and sweet. This was good and verywell written. I am sure some people could feel the same way. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
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Oh wow, how true these few words really are.... Amazingly penned, my dear friend.... I'm just sitting here in awwww....
It is really beautiful... I applaud you countless times
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BEAUTIFUL! <3
Very original thought I love it! good luck!
x
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awww, that was so sweet very nicely written. its amazing how poetry and emotion can be expressed through so little words. Nice job it made my heart smile.
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