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A Bi Polar

A Bi Polar

In and out up and down I take another pill.
I say I won’t I scream it loud still  I know I will.
High and lows and so it goes day in and day out .
How can you understand me or what I am about?

I have the proof, the papers I am certified to be
Just as I choose whenever and I can still be me.
I pity those with sanity for this is much more fun.
I can blame it on Bi Polar whatever I have done.

A screaming fit or spend too much or just be in a mood .
I can laugh out loud  hysterically or sit around and brood.
A slip of tongue a careless deed whose to say the indication.
I am in control more than they know, when I take my medication.

Still I often wonder how life would change for me
If for one day I was Normal, what the world would see.
I would not question everything I do or if my feelings were really true.
If for a day I was normal, I wonder what I would do?

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In and out up and down I take another pill.

Written April 8th, 2004

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  • April 8, 2004
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    another "last minute" entry. welcome!
    this was an interesting spin on the topic
    i'm not entirely sure you read (or followed)
    the contest "rules". you still have a few hours in order to make any changes...should you choose to do so!
    thanks for entering the contest...
    nice to have more to choose from.
    ~liz