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Longing

Sitting there, watching you cry
Knowing what my heart said,
And knowing that you will never want me

If she hurt you that much,
Why do you still love her?

When she didn't show,
Why do you still care?

I have been here all along
Nursing your wounds from all her "fun"
And still you are blind to me.

Your smile means everything to me
Your laugh makes even the darkest clouds disperse
And every tear rips my heart into many little pieces.

Then the last song came
You begged me to dance with you
But I said no... when my heart screamed yes

Because I'm not the one you would see dancing
I'm not the one who you want
I could see it in your eyes, your tears

and I can't compet with that.

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The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else.
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this is very true to my life right now...

typos if any

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  • Andi. gold member
    October 4

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    "And every tear rips my heart into many little pieces"
    Favourite line.
    so honest, but sad.
    well done
    thank you.
    ♥ andi.


  • nasty24
    October 4

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    this is really good. i can relate a lot to this. keep up the good work.

  • such an amazing poem. i think you made a typo with "You smile means everything to me
    You laugh makes even the darkest clouds disperse"
    u mean your smile and your laugh

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