Pure freshwater pearls
cleave in viscous devotion
to jade fingertips.
by Alby
4.10.2009
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Fantastic imagery of freshwater pearls and then jade fingertips. This gives the reader much to visualize and the delicacy of the image at hand. Keep penning these haiku beauties.
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Thanks so much Scarlet...Alby
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Hoodwink 149
I liked your poem. I think that is a pretty picture. You been hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits because someone cared about you. Best of luck to you in your future writes.
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Thank you so much for the hoodwink. It was totally unexpected. It is nice to know people care. Always good to see you...Alby
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Hood-Wink!
What a stunning Haiku
I love the imagery of "... jade fingertips" and "... freshwater pearls" - both are truly mesmerizing and captivating; just wow!
Stay safe
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Gosh...mow I have found comment no.4 by you! You must be sick of reading me by now, surely!
Thank you for all the time you have invested in hoodwinking me today, and all your encouraging comments. You really are a gem. Alby
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HOODWINKED !
Alby,
This is a deeply visual rendering of the lovely picture, a viewed moment captured in this lovely Haiku! Well done my friend!
Write On!
You have been Hoodwinked today by your Poetic Bandit
friends because WE CARE!
Brother Dennis
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Oh Dennis...thank you so much. Hoodwinked...wow... you certainly have surprised me and brought tears to my eyes. Unbelieveable! Glad you liked this little poem. It's nice to see you again. Alby
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stunning .. each word cultured like the pearl.. well said in Haiku song hugs always Angel♥
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Thank you for reading me and leaving such a complimentary comment. Glad you liked it...Alby
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you are welcome hun♥
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I am a photographer just free lance nothing special
but your photo is just stunning, your Haiku
if a beautiful match for it.
love and blessings
Rend
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Hi Rend...nice to see you here. Yes, I like doing photography, nature shots mostly, but I am just a novice at it and do it for my own pleasure. Its good to have a way of using them here at AP. I think this is only the second one I've posted here. Thank you for your kind comments on both my photo and poetry. Your visit is much appreciated...Alby
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Ooh, I love that. If your camera has a good enough zoom and focus capability, you can capture some amazing worlds within the water drops themselves, too. Check out www.flickr.com for some crazy water drop shots. The haiku is awesome, too. It fits the photo perfectly.
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Thanks so much Mark. I'm glad you liked my photo as much as my haiku. I will take a look in flickr when I get the chance, I would love to see worlds within water droplets. Alby
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Oh my goodness! Just perfect for the picture. So refreshing, I can almost taste those little drops of water. Beautiful. Lita
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Glad you liked this. Thanks for commenting...Alby
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The photo and words
merge as art
oerfectly framed
by you, the creator
of the scenario!
Quite beautiful, Alby!
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Thank you so much for your comment here. Knowing that you are so creative yourself makes your comment all the more precious...Alby
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I was imagining your moment of discovery---
and finally seeing the results---and the words
so perfect--had to been one of those
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You descibed that well. Thank you so much
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Love it
Beautiful picture with beautiful words to back it up.
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Thank you for commenting...I'm glad you liked both my photo and poem...Alby
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a lovely set of counted syllables. i love it.
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Thank you for saying you love this little poem. Your comments are always appreciated. Alby
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You have chosen perfect words to compliment the image. A beautiful piece to read first thing in the morning. Lovely.
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Thank you for your kind words Scarlet. I'm glad that I was able to help start your day with a bit of nature's beauty. Alby
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Gorgeous Alby.... the photo and the poem gel so perfectly. Seems as though this is truly a picture inspired poem, but knowing you.... it is probably not wise to form such an assumption
Maybe there is something in the 'Haiku.' You are slowly making me appreciate them.
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Yes...this is a picture inspired poem...but I like to write in a way that suggests hidden alternative meanings within these little ones. Glad you are starting to like them. It took me a while to like them too...(and I still don't like them THAT much ) Thanks for your comment...Alby
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awesome!
the pic, and piece..perfect together..wow alby you are an excellent photographer and i'm ashamed i almost forgot about that..
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Thanks Swan...we are just two hellishly talented dudes, hey!
Thanks for your words here, great to see you. Alby
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that is something very special Alby. Both the photo and the poem. They combine together, yet compliment each other. Beautiful.
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Thank you Bob. We have had rain here in Sydney these last couple of days. I took this photo this morning after the rain stopped. This Jade tree is just outside my back door. ...Alby
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