Why are you here with me
between worlds unknown to you
one I’m not even sure of
you want me to choose
yet I sense the same as I did back then
that the maze of yours has no end
...lost within crippled dreams...
And black feathers, play along
the icy slope of the forgotten one
forsaken in your own world, my love
retrieve your own magic, not mine
no one else can bind me, but me
enchanted disasters trapped inside
...an innocent mind...
A title of the moon, in a visible reality
understanding the wisdom
moving from world to world
silently capturing the illusions within
a crystal prison with a flowery lock
no matter how pretty
... it is just that...
I choose to love
and life, within all my worlds
for trust to awaken
the gifts of all my divinity
to challenge and to conquer all my evils
and to gently rest the great heavens
within myself
might it be only
...for a single moment...
Please tell me what you think
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Your poetry is filled ...
with the deep yearning to be peaceful in the sacredness of Being. For me as a Believer, the answer is Jesus the Christ. I think the true value of your poetry is the fact that it allows the reader to bring to your poem their own deep set beliefs.
May you have a wondrous day of discovery and of Love Divine.
Myra
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A wonderful write. I imagined a woman in the beginning saying something to her lover, then slowly losing track and forgetting he was there and getting lost in herself and her own emotions. To be honest, it was as if Scarlett O'hara were reciting this in my mind, and for me, that's an amazing thing. Great piece.
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I hope the man up in the moon will take this letter to our Father so that your "single moment" will become an everlasting moment and that you will find the waters of rest and love that you so deeply yearn for. This poem struck a cord so deep within me and it is like I can feel your warm tears dripping on my hands as I type this reply...
LOVELY POETRY
Becks
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I love this style. nothing rhymed and yet there was some sort of tune or hum while you read the poem . I realy can imagine the moon going from one place to another. very discriptive! love it!
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this is beautiful, well versed. love your style
keep penning
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I know the feeling of this. You are trying to find that one point in time were everything is just at its best. I really enjoyed this poem you put it together very well. I hope you find that place all the time. Thank you for reading one of my poems that means a lot to me SH
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I have fallen in love with your style..I love free verse..This was beautiful..The imagery was bountless..I can feel your emotions..your thoughts..If you allowed, at some point, I would love to do a collab with you..You are talented.Please add me to your favorites..I would be honored..Congrats..Wow.
John
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What a wonderful read! I found it to be sad but you have woven it to show the strength that you have and the fact that you are a survivor. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Great imagery in this one. A work to be proud of.
Uh Line 3 should that be of instead of off?
Great poem.
Joe
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Fantastic!!! What great meaning. Beautifully described.
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wow
that was a super poem you did excel in emotions and feelings....you seem to state that there is this person whom you like and he inhabits your inner to the max..and yet is elusive..and you build castles...that remain.....loved this one...glad i read it -
Oh my gosh, sis this is such a beautiful poem .It granted me with such imagery and emotional pulls that lead me to such a heart wrenching sight within my mind. Such a beautiful and bittersweet write sis. I applaud you numerous times for such great talent with words behind illusion.
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Elmarie this is such a beautiful poem!!! Superb word choice that takes one to another realm. So beautiful yet so sad. My heart sheds crimson tears as I pray that your pain does vanish for a Goddess should never cry.
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Nothing to say..
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only for a moment, but then i find myself chasing to capture those moments again and again until a life they provide.
beyond the wonder of your closing stanza, i also found these lines most captivating - "you want me to choose yet I sense the same as I did back then that the maze of yours has no end". well done.
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Sis,
I am stunned beyond words! This is simply amazing! You really did a great job on this one! I am impressed sis!! I love the images you have in this one!
and love
Nyetta
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i just love poetry that is so profound a reader can place what ever interpretation (how do i spell that lol) they choose..i see a deep struggle and acceptance here,of the eternal now seen through enlightened eyes as you write..... "a crystal prison with a flowery lock no matter how pretty, is just that"...wonderful....
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