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A Silly Old Man In His Diapers

I could never understand why the
American Right hated this guy
so much. Even if he was
more performance artist than
saint how many saints can say they have
have led more people
more or less
in the right direction.

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  • CaptainObvious gold member
    November 9

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    I really like this. It's very witty. I like that you pulled your Gandhi theme from a much different direction than most people would have. Well done!


  • neurosine gold member
    October 5

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    He tried to awaken peoples mind to the fact that they were not rats in a cage. This sort of message always infuriates the right...like children not getting their way. Their juvenile outbreaks annoying, but effective.
    Yee Haw.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 4

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    this was an interesting look at a great man, i enjoyed it, esp the part about being more performance artist than saint, but then again which does the world need more of, keep it flowing


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 4

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    Gandhi, to me, is one who lead many people to peace, who suffered and sacrificed like other's are seldom willing to do and so they must denigrate such as him.