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I Want To

I want to believe
to believe in you.
And in what the things
you say are true.

I've never felt a love
quite like this before.
I feel like what your telling me
comes as quite a chore.

I want to know that love
the kind that feels so right.
Not that one that leaves you
feeling such a fright.

To know that feeling is returned
that is what I seek.
But I'm always left feeling sad
and always very bleak.

For you belong
to another in reality.
And I am no home wrecker
in all actuality.

To take you from your life
if you are truly happy.
Would only make me feel worse
would make me feel real crappie.

This is not the best
that I have ever written.
But baby with you
I am really smitten.

It doesn't help at all
that I'm a little drunk!
And this piece I know
it really kind of stunk!

lol

Author notes

Started out serious but the more I drank the more it wound up silly!!! Sorry

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 29

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    i liked it heaps coz i know that feeling then we get a little smashed and loose the intensity but gee you still made it a good read with a little larf at the end yep sweet and cool cute even bless ya glenn


  • honorable mention
    October 23
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    "Started out serious but the more I drank the more it wound up silly!!! " But that's the best kind of poetry Drunken nonsense.


    • sensualbutterfly
      October 23
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      yeah it is isn't it! Drunken nonsense was what it was too! Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! It's greatly appreciated!!! Stay tuned I'm sure there will be more drunken nonsense to follow lol!


  • lynda
    October 13

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    Oh baby girl...please don't feel "crappie"...men do that to us so often...hold up your head and keep on writing...it will get better. hugs, Lynda


  • firion
    October 4
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    lol amusing yet also sad and sweet
    3 kisses baby you kno where to put em
    good write as always


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 4

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    lol, i am the same way even when i am not tispy, it helps to ease the tense, and i don't like to get too serious sometimes. i am kind of a clown, keep it flowing


    • sensualbutterfly
      October 4
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      Thanks Aaron for the comment...I like to be that way too and not be tipsy, but they just seemed to come better that way last night! Thanks again for the comment


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 4

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    L.O.L. ..YEAH..

    drinking, and true confessions don't really mix well my friend! l.o.l. but hey at least you expressed real affection for your love interest, that's gotta at least bring a smile to his face..
    i personally thought is was good..for being drunk! l.o.l. j.k. i really liked this my friend..


    • sensualbutterfly
      October 4
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      lol thanks!!! glad you think so...I read it this morning and laughed! I thought it was silly but thanks for the comment my friend


  • carl dunford
    October 4

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    Hic!!!!! The truth always comes out after a few drinks lol!!!
    Never the less baby there is a message in your poem .
    One that I can relate to!
    Not silly at all more soul searching I would say.

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