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Where's Waldo?

My body moves
Deeply Resonating
With Rhythms,
Sound,
Touch,
And too, Love.

The chord is strong.
My core has held
Onto a
“Silent, Secret” Love
For more than
15 years now.

The question
I’m asking is
Just how
Strong do you
Want me to be?

I’m much more
Patient than I
Used to be
But further torture
Now is not
What I need…..

Where in the world
Could you possibly be?

Author notes

Drawn to the unveiling.....

Good Lord, please let it come soon - these mysteries veiled in Love and Light, they play with Shadows, nearly driving me to distraction.

And yet again, a new Understanding.

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  • Titus gold member
    October 19

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    That is some core you have. a resounding calm surroundig that beautiful soul, lovely job here.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    October 9

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    OMG, this is fantastic! Do not touch this! The torture of self is evident as is the plea, the longing for it all to consumate and move to a higher level. I feel this acutely and it touches my soul.


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 4

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    This was really good and very interesting to read. So where is Waldo? LOL This was good. I really liked the lines:

    The question
    I’m asking is
    Just how
    Strong do you
    Want me to be?

    Keep up the good work!