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Blind

If I show you my scars
will you finally see
that you have really
broken me?

If I decide
to die today
will that show you
that I'm not ok?

If I stop listening
and never speak
would that that tell you
that I'm weak?

If I tell you
what I'm thinking
would you realize
that I'm sinking?

If I leave my razor
for you to find
would you admit
that you are blind?

Author notes

about trying to think of ways to show my dad that i need help and im not ok and that he is the reason for my pain.

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