Borrowing time for the moment to be real
Intensity to the extreme, just to feel.
Retro only in idea of the modern mind
Thrilling to the ethereal spirit divine.
Hither to the tides grow quite high
Of brilliance and bright white-blue light
Forth coming is the beginning of a dawn,
Tracked by the universe in a special bond
Her face quite heavenly in the night sky
Eternal and clear as the cocoon died.
Mother Moon, born anew in the rise of man
Oblivious to the linear time humans demand.
Omnipotence in every aspect of the trilogy
Nocturnal as the reflection of eternity.
In a list
A contest entry
- birth of the moon by AutumnGypsy.
550 points, ended November 22, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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strong write
Do not know the form, but the words are a powerful write. May this piece get its just due. The words do speak to me.
Well done, dragon.
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Acrostic
is the form and it is so very good to hear from you my friend!
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my darling dragonblue,
another wonderful piece you penned here
good luck in all you do my dear
Love
Passionspromise
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Thank you for reading and replying Passion. Your input never fails to inspire me.
Blessed Be~
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