Never
say never,
bet on the dark horse,
listen to the bats; leave the cave,
abuse earth's good medicine,
or cast an empty lot without knowing the way.
Never
say never,
cliche for a reason.
A contest entry
- One Word Prompt #6 by Diminished Capacity.
725 points, ended October 12, 2009, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wonderful
Very creative and so well written. Congratulations on your honorable mention
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listen to the bats
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Never say never, that is so very true. Great job with this write, thank you so much for entering.
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best of luck in the contest
Truer words are seldom heard. This has a very Hunter S. Thompson-esque feel in the delivery. I'm diggin it.
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honored
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rake the snakes into one pile and bring your cigarette lighter with milk...
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Very strong write.
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I'm hearing you out loud...
Never
say never,
cliche for a reason.
so true my friend.. good luck
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bet on the dark horse
i agree with you on this one right there, keep it flowing -
i love this write. the way you word things is very nice. especially the last line. wonderful write. and well said.
Never
say never,
cliche for a reason.
you bring more power to the saying. -
awesome...there is alot of strength in this little write...words, wise and pained...i hear you in this one, easily...smooth and deep...sense of a lovely heavy dark looming...i dig this...well done
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