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the art of the dance

 

 

it's quiet here,
in the green hours

 

and i, afraid to make a noise
wait barefooted

 

for a dance in the rain

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sideways hourglass
    October 30
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    lovely.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 18
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    such allure


  • Cat
    October 4
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  • Rowan gold member
    October 4
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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 3

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    Prettiful, Poet.


  • Stuart Higginson gold member
    October 3

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    Anticipation in a tranquil moment ... the yearning of the chance for the inner free-spirit to unleash itself with the elements. This piece is expressed simply but profoundly. You capture a moment well here, Elora.

    I love the rain - that which falls on a lazy Sunday afternoon ... that which falls into the night, demanding to be heard.

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