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sky

never foreal is the unforseen for those who do not look
but go for the real OGs the light is shown
in the brightest neon the mind can imagine
for we can do what we put our minds to
and read between the lines of this glory
we wait for

tell me is the word as real as we are or
are we the ones of fakeness and the unreal
fixation of the not so new but to our eyes
that have not seen this newness of life
never gain to be blind

never again to be indifference of the fellow
black white or inbetweens
and be the thugs of a new lord born into darkness
to feed on the light with a new thurst
to finish to fullness

im seein but not to clearly help me. not a bad but just a fogged

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  • Lady Purple
    October 3

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    wow dude i never thought in a million years dat ur writin wud leave me speechless n have me thinkin n wonderin like dude. but keep up tha great write tho