A sense of worthlessness
Permeated the air
She lost her being
Her soul disintegrated
And in that moment she died
For though her heart still beat
She died forever.
In Pace Requiescat.
Author notes
I know it was supposed to be 40-50 lines, but this is what was inspired from Haunted.
A contest entry
- Let's make it fast :) by LeilaJayne.
400 points, ended October 4, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I had to look up the last line... but i think it's a fabulous idea of using the latin. Has a greater beauty about it. This was reallly reallly good!
Thanks for entering
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well penned,
goos luck to you in the contest
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