Danger eliminates the blessed feelings
talking to you no longer gets us anywhere.
I can sit there all day and sink into the pain
you never see me as me anymore it hurts.
I used to believe that we would make it through
life's lessons overwhelm my love.
Release me from this hell you call love
let me leave with my dignity intact.
So what if my heart is the casualty this time
so carelessly you shoved me out the door.
Always wishing upon the stars I see outside
never getting the dreams we spoke of once.
You leave me no choice but to run away
arms outreached to stop me not this time!
Thoughtless attractions to those around
I can't take it anymore, my world collapsed.
Slinky females sliding into your heart and soul
no longer am I ever going to be enough for you.
Always looking towards the skimpy blonde's
better dressed brunettes attract your eyes.
Living a life full of remorse and self hatred
knowing that I can never outshine them.
Barbie can only give you what you think you want
Once upon a time I would have given everything you need.
Heaven used to be where I thought we were
Hell is the cold shoulder of regret.
Midnight Raeven
October 3, 2009
5:03PM
Author notes
I chose title number 7
Hell is the cold shoulder of regret.
A contest entry
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great expression of emotion.
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niniBABY(:
Wow x) i enjoyed this poem, it kept me on the edge of my seat i actually, literally read it three times lol.
KEEP WRITING!
Nini
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we picked the same title and I just had to come and see what your take on the title would be. And I most say I like your take on it . It sad when love turn into nothing but regret and in our soul we know that deep down it was never any more then what we made I think that is what we regret the most
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golden, keep it flowing
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