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With Every Breath I Miss You

For years filled my heart to the brim,
I gave my heart and soul to him.
We loved, laughed till he had to go,
still within my heart I love him so.

Friends became lovers, before I knew,
hopelessly falling in love with you.
Gave all my love mid a million tears,
tears can't erase love all these years.

Some nights are endless, never end,
in my dreams once more I pretend.
I hear your voice and see your smile,
thinking of you across the miles.

So easily I gave you all of my heart,
forever loving you though far apart.
Not wanting another to kiss my lips,
nor the touch of another's fingertips.

I go on loving the man who you are,
dancing in dreams beneath our star.
Consuming my heart, my love goes on,
throughout the years and far beyond.

Time and distance can never measure,
how much your love gives me pleasure.
How good it would have been long ago,
now happiness my heart will never know.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Sometimes we love forever with every breath and tear even though it can never be. Love knows no time nor distance nor reason and can be never-ending. Felt ever so deeply with warm feelings and sweet memories.

Contest Prompt is...

Just one question...have you ever had that love that is unconditional, all consuming. Where you could think of nothing else but that other person. Your thoughts and actions were all consumed with them. You could think of nothing else and longed to be with them no matter what the cost? Write me about it...sensually erotic will be accepted. Tell me in the poem if it lasted or was lost but you would have rather felt the love and hurt or felt nothing at all...

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  • Floatational
    October 4

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    Wow Sandy please know that I feel everything you write and your words speak into my emotions I thank you please keep writing.


    • Sandygram
      October 4
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      Hello

      Thank you for the lovely comment. I write what is within my heart. Glad you enjoy it. Take care and have a wonderful day. .

      Peace and Grace, Sandy


  • LittleMoon silver member
    October 4

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    This is really heart breaking as I am in this place too. Love with no hope at all, you have described exactly the desolation when there is nothing but memory of the intimate words exchanged. First love sometimes never quite dies, finds you again and becomes last love but it cannot be, I have to lose him all over again. Sheila


    • Sandygram
      October 4
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      Thank you Shelia

      Always nice to hear from you. Take care.

      Bless You, Sandy


  • FransB gold member
    October 4

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    This is so beautiful

    to read. There is a mixture of emotions within me spawned from the first line of this poem. I marvel at the simplisity of words and their breadth of scope. Remarkable write, wanting me not to intrude, but at te same time I could not stop reading. Blessings my friend and peace to you. Frans

    • Sandygram
      October 4
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      A Big Hello To You My Friend!

      Always nice to hear from my dear friend.Thank you for the thoughtful comment. I keep you and your family in my prayers across the Big Pond. So glad things are going well for you. Hugs and Smiles, Bless You. Sandy


  • sensualbutterfly
    October 3

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    your words were so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes...I had hoped beyond hope that it was everlasting but I know it can not always be. I always say I am glad to feel this way and hurt than to never have felt at all. Such a beautiful write and I thank you so much for sharing with me. Good luck


  • awannabepoet
    October 3

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    Sandy, you always have this way of touching something deep with my being, I love the words you wrote and somehow I feel like they fall right into place with the way I feel tonight.

    Thank you so much for always being there with the write poem, the gentle hellos and simply being a great friend.

    • Sandygram
      October 4
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      Well Hello My Friend

      Thank you for the nice comment. So glad you enjoyed my poem. This one is from the heart. I sit and write what I feel. You take care and enjoy this beautiful day. Hugs and Smiles,

      Peace and Grace, Sandy


  • Antipodi
    October 3

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    Tis so love is unassuming yet binding and truth in love is beyond comprehension for it becomes a part of the soul that binds us to another ...let us hope one day this love will also win all wars they shall never again be conflict ...for we were meant to love its our very procreational purpose as well as our need for a mate to become one in two

    • Sandygram
      October 4
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      Hello

      I thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Your lovely and thoughtful comment is so appreciated. You take care, Sandy


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 3

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    Beautiful take on the prompt sweetie
    I need not tell you how close this hits home for me
    Love this grand does last for etenity
    Just like your friendship, it means the world to me

    Wish you the very best in the contest
    Keep your talented quill dancing
    Much love and many blessings my friend

    David

    • Sandygram
      October 4
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      Hello Swete Friend

      You always leave such caring and thoughtful comment. I know how you feel when you read this. I write what is in my heart. Sometimes we have to just take what life gives us and make the best of it somehow. Its the somehow I am still trying to figure out. . Hugs and Smiles my friend.

      Hope you have a wonderful day.

      Bless You, Sandy

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