Black man Kobaining his lustful wishes
under a waxed mustache
pissed that little Richard stole his act
and left him with mediocrity
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7-11; 31st Street; Temple, TX; 3AM (inside)
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This reads like a snapshot of a random person in a random place, and it reads that way very well. Nice write here, I like the feelings conveyed.
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that's what the gas station pieces are. various people and situations at various gas stations in the US and Canada. glad you enjoyed
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lol I am trying to solve this poem...I like it but I'm not sure I get it. kobaining must have something to do with kurt kobain...so i am picturing a black man rocking out to nirvana at a gas station with as much enthusiasm as little richard.
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he had this little richard mustache and talked like him, but he told me it was new age to listen to nirvana in 2002. It made me laugh.
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awesome
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