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In Wholeness

Joyfully,

I would find my sunrise within
the boundaries of your shadow.

Satisfaction,

I would experience inside of your
loving embrace, as you held me tightly.

Stalwartly,

I would tremble with each wave of pleasure,
crashing into my body from deep in your soul.

Tenderly,

I would offer my life in sacrifice as
I fought the horrors of this existence.

Contentedly,

I would continue to whisper your name,
for it dwells upon my lips in solitude.

In Wholeness,

I would walk alongside of you
throughout this life, as well as
the eternal one that awaits us beyond.

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  • mcheadle
    November 10

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    Great job

    You wrote with your whole heart. The love was coming out all the way through...mac


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 5

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    a beautiful flow of an enduring love just waiting to be given...a soft dream like flow of magic dancing as the wind across your canvas of words...niaish for sharing them with me and for entering


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    October 3

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    And the sum of all makes up the whole! Well done, showing a multifaceted understanding of love and its' many components. I like the theme, format and the wisdom expressed in this poem. Write On!

    Brother Dennis