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Getting Older

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The silver threads get more silver

as we all slowly mature so fine

Our golden needles get more sharper

as we get wiser with passing time

 

 

Getting older has many problems

 

God only knows that I have mine

 

Depending on a cane for balance

 

Taking naps and sipping wine

 

 

Each decade that we live

has many advantages for that age

We fill our book with joy and pleasure

and record our memories on each page

 

Maturing folks sit back and wonder

the rocking chair going full speed ahead

The golden needles flash with knowledge

while silver threads crown their head

 

Leaving our book of recorded memories

of climbing mountains and sailing the sea

Will our descendants read the chapters

and speak of pictures we left for thee

 

 

 

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  • SimplySonnets gold member
    November 8

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    Age is but a number, full steam ahead into the wonderful world of the idle, where the importance of life lays in your own hands. Fear not anything you know nothing of. Seneca ( I think) Loved your fabulous poem with your wonderful talent to pick just the right words. Favourite, " Taking naps sipping wine" Thank you.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    November 2

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    The age old thoughts as we hurtle towards old age, suddenly our mortality or rather lack of it looms large. As the word Adult turns on us, sounding more like a curse word than the badge of achievement it once meant. So we defy it in an attempt to regain or child hood and the circle of life is complete... great rhyme flow topical content well done
    Cyber Artist


  • condor gold member
    October 18

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    This is such a delightful peaceful read that I think I might have been sitting there with that couple enjoying the coziness of later life. This was beautifully written with a lot of wonderful feelings and emotions placed in the words. The twilight years that are yet to come for me will be welcomed. I intend to be doing just like these old couple in a couple of years with a little bit of luck. Congrats on the HM and thanks for the great read.


  • John Faulkner
    October 12
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    super imagery..wonderful poem..beautiful thoughts..good luck in the contest..bye

    john


  • aboomer silver member
    October 9

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    Wonderful wording, images and flow to go with that great picture! I much enjoyed this. This is one of my favorite reads so far.
    (reminds me also of that song 'silver threads and golden needles'...)
    nice job

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • islekine gold member
    October 9

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    Ahhh..Silver threads and Golden needles!

    Wonderful write! Love the picture! Thanks so much for sharing your talent...hope to see you again and again!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • Howard Manser gold member
    October 4
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    A Wonderful Observation

    and perception for one so far from the mirror. Howard


  • Antipodi
    October 3
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    Great portrait of me and ma sittin in the ol chair seriously this is beautiful verse dear poet and really enjoyed the read

  • ricachic gold member
    October 3

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    Once again a nice job Mary but you didn't have to remind me of all my silver threads, lets hope there are a few more chapters to go, never know...
    next to the last line, typo-decedents won't be reading much but their descendants might. thanks for a lovely read,
    Rick

    • amysticwriter silver member
      October 3
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      Thanks for the nice comment Rick...and the correction, guess I forgot to sc...

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