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ghost

i seen a ghost one night
it gave me quite a fright
it wasent so bright
it was bodly white

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  • mystic mind
    October 4
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    thanks thats was my first poem im new to this


  • saya225
    October 3
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    cute i like it

    • mystic mind
      October 4
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      thank you that was my first peom im new to this


      • saya225
        October 4
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        also can you comment on my poems even if you don't like them and say if i need to fix them in any way

      • saya225
        October 4
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        ur welcome im not good at this at all oh ur much better than me

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