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What He Doesn't Realize

I say he's a good friend over and over and over
But then he breaks my heart more and more and more.
All summer, it was "Wait when the school year starts."
Now its started and it seems you don't care about breaking my heart.
There's another girl, another so-called love.
And I have the feeling that I'll somehow end up the rebound.
Why must it hurt
Yet somehow I can't cry?
I don't really think I can fall for another of his lies.
I really can't take much more.
I'm sick of all the lies.
And though it might sound stupid, I'd feel better if I could just cry.

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I can't seem to get over a guy...

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  • saya225
    October 3
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    wow i like it im touched