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Sid

Oh what a tortured soul, such a pretty boy,
But you don't even know, where to fucking go,
So, let me show you, a whole new kind of low,
Something that'll really make you sick
Like a wrist nice and freshly slit,
Like the lying, corrupt, politics,
Like an unelected president, the coke he sniffs,
Watch him piss on our wounds, he thinks he's handled it,
And oh, just look at thee, you need some sympathy?
Oh, you'll fucking get none from me,
So listen boy, why wont you come to me,
Enlighten you, the blessed insanity in all of it's divinity

Something incredibly Disgusting,
Savoring Insignificant Discoveries,
Salvation, Incomplete Destiny,
Someone Ignoring Death?
Sid!

Oh, where's your joy, little pretty boy?
Are you a tad annoyed, with all of life's unpleasant ploys?
The over use of drugs the needle in the vain?
Disgusting fucking thugs, a life bringing only pain?
Listen in the night, hear the baby cry?
Doesn't it just bring a death tear to your eye?
Oh, so, you wanna die, spread false angel wings, away just fly,
Ha!, what a fucking lie, a loving god up in the sky?
Oh but the goddess cares, but she´s be crying saddened tears,
Her little child in so much fear,
So listen boy, why wont you come to me,
Enlighten you, the blessed insanity in all of it's divinity

Sodomizing, Insecure Descendants
Soulless, Irritable Deities.
Sinful, Insidious Demons
Someone Ignoring Death?
Sid!

Side listen hear, and lets make it clear
All in your life, the upsetting things, the source of all tears ,
Or are you going to die here? another year, life flying by
Do you even care?
No! didn't think so,
Boy, gonna try again, fly high, try and die again?
Simple, Idiotic Degenerate,
Sid.

Author notes

Just a little something I wrote around the name Sid, for some reason it put me in a political mode

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  • Biggest-MIstake
    October 21
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    this is great i love this and this is very well written
    i rilly like this great job
    aj :}


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 19

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    This was really good and enjoyale to read. It was well written. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest. Keep up the good work!