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Sickness?

Longing to hold the one I desire,
How passion, obsession burns for you like white fire
Forever I'll love you,
Sick love lift me higher

Passion for you bleed from me to the grave,
And dig up the dirt, your love I will save,
For not even your death will stand in my way
I must have your love, let your corps with me stay

Longing to hold the one I desire,
How passion, obsession burns for you like white fire
Forever I'll love you,
Sick love lift me higher

Now your rotting corps I hold in my hands,
I am forever yours, my love your command,
You sit there so silent, is there something wrong,
Why wont you say that you love me, I've waited so long,

Longing to hold the one I desire,
How passion, obsession burns for you like white fire
Forever I'll love you,
Sick love lift me higher

Say something, anything,
Why wont you respond?
I loved you, and still do,
Why wont you respond?
Are tears seeping, or blood bleeding?
Why wont you respond?
What's this laughing? It's so deafening
Obsession, corrupted my thoughts

Author notes

Just a little turn I wrote a while ago, hope you enjoy.

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